tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post814374028637842977..comments2024-03-24T11:17:10.498-07:00Comments on Unemployed Imagination.: 2 Minutes. Go!JD Maderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comBlogger195125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-59541452035103447732014-09-21T15:38:00.120-07:002014-09-21T15:38:00.120-07:00Thanks, guys! :)Thanks, guys! :)Lynne Cantwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05397656985652575608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-20129148415366370582014-09-21T13:09:46.323-07:002014-09-21T13:09:46.323-07:00I hate the dentist. :)I hate the dentist. :)JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-50270981679197588852014-09-21T13:08:51.761-07:002014-09-21T13:08:51.761-07:00I like all over the place!I like all over the place!JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-75250377215017884092014-09-21T13:06:33.146-07:002014-09-21T13:06:33.146-07:00It's good company indeed. I'm going to sto...It's good company indeed. I'm going to stockpile some nutmeg now... :)JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-64594594328995188142014-09-20T17:21:46.448-07:002014-09-20T17:21:46.448-07:00clever :-)clever :-)Brenda Perlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13082490921735156699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-83933104832196207662014-09-20T17:21:14.588-07:002014-09-20T17:21:14.588-07:00Darrrk!!!! ;-)Darrrk!!!! ;-)Brenda Perlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13082490921735156699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-32318280952489905302014-09-20T17:19:30.875-07:002014-09-20T17:19:30.875-07:00Really nice. Loved it!Really nice. Loved it!Brenda Perlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13082490921735156699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-14764724705789636632014-09-20T09:33:24.705-07:002014-09-20T09:33:24.705-07:00I know that chick! And that bar! :) It's cool ...I know that chick! And that bar! :) It's cool the way so much is conveyed through the details. Well played, G. -JDAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-24447853986059091752014-09-20T07:14:23.172-07:002014-09-20T07:14:23.172-07:00It amazes me that all the flashers here are excell...It amazes me that all the flashers here are excellent writers. I feel good in your company.Salvatore Buttacihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17477098872186908154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-83155193475122182082014-09-20T07:07:44.378-07:002014-09-20T07:07:44.378-07:00Lynne, there must be something to it. I've oft...Lynne, there must be something to it. I've often dreamed I am either a spice harvester or a military spice officer somewhere in the galaxy. Maybe we ought to save our cinnamon and oregano instead of silver and gold coins. Maybe one day we'll thyme travel!Salvatore Buttacihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17477098872186908154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-17082664753973068862014-09-20T06:42:37.015-07:002014-09-20T06:42:37.015-07:00Thanks Julie and JD. Interesting. I think you...Thanks Julie and JD. Interesting. I think you're right Julie he (^^) is a scoundrel and therefore the piece completely doesn't fit the character I was actually writing about. I'm afraid I can't be even slightly out of it during 2minutes a go go otherwise I'm all over the place.Lily Javahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14030043152435871912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-69128605990019111002014-09-19T21:49:41.979-07:002014-09-19T21:49:41.979-07:00Trouble walked into the bar wearing pink Doc Marte...Trouble walked into the bar wearing pink Doc Martens and a frilly Hot Topic skirt. Her iridescent dragonfly wings drew a lot of attention, not because they were real, but because they weren't. <br /><br />Tourist season. Great. My favorite fucking time of year.<br /><br />I thought about escorting the little lady and her black-lipsticked friend out of the bar--our bar--but never let it be said that I'm a gentleman. She'd found her way into trouble; she could find her own way out.lbclark75https://www.blogger.com/profile/06976461452839934801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-28295393240395024562014-09-19T21:16:44.604-07:002014-09-19T21:16:44.604-07:00You don't know why but your arms are shaking, ...You don't know why but your arms are shaking, your chest feels ... undependable. Lungs too small. Heart too weak. It's in your head, but the head is in cahoots with the whole fucking shooting match. The dentist doesn't hate your teeth, he hates you ... your brain. He stays up nights, erect over a tray of gleaming silver tools. <br /><br />Sometimes, he will take one in his slender, white fingers. Feel it's cold weight. He will imagine the horror he can wrench from your mouth, the exquisite terror you will feel. He is so alive. So fucking alive. And you WILL scream. You will writhe like a hooked nightcrawler and he will smile shyly to himself, lost in the romance of your pain.JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-65438654844678884022014-09-19T21:12:51.717-07:002014-09-19T21:12:51.717-07:00Yup. It just so happens I recently read a scene by...Yup. It just so happens I recently read a scene by a famous author about a Ferris Wheel. His was very good. You got it perfect. Excellent piece.JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-1150698467376328092014-09-19T21:11:02.747-07:002014-09-19T21:11:02.747-07:00The contrast between the two paragraphs is wonderf...The contrast between the two paragraphs is wonderful. I particularly like the slight twist in tone at the end. Thank you for joining us. :)JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-86162943664997710362014-09-19T21:09:08.566-07:002014-09-19T21:09:08.566-07:00I agree. That was a slick trick. Well done. I'...I agree. That was a slick trick. Well done. I'm enjoying the bar period. JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-11931495242134093702014-09-19T21:07:43.317-07:002014-09-19T21:07:43.317-07:00I agree with Julie. Unflinching. Very adept use of...I agree with Julie. Unflinching. Very adept use of language, too. Well in. I was wondering where you were. ;)JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-1236909926176693162014-09-19T21:06:02.207-07:002014-09-19T21:06:02.207-07:00lol. Agreed. :)lol. Agreed. :)JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-22810492574708074552014-09-19T21:05:12.253-07:002014-09-19T21:05:12.253-07:00Thank ya much!Thank ya much!JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-14670278701651397572014-09-19T21:02:31.489-07:002014-09-19T21:02:31.489-07:00Thanks y'allThanks y'allJD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-9643562328626650912014-09-19T18:44:19.880-07:002014-09-19T18:44:19.880-07:00Oooh. I like this unicorn. :)Oooh. I like this unicorn. :)lbclark75https://www.blogger.com/profile/06976461452839934801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-59535777418135536362014-09-19T18:43:04.986-07:002014-09-19T18:43:04.986-07:00"Divine Blowhard." That's priceless..."Divine Blowhard." That's priceless. lbclark75https://www.blogger.com/profile/06976461452839934801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-33735490772077593662014-09-19T18:40:44.043-07:002014-09-19T18:40:44.043-07:00Gross. But well told. :DGross. But well told. :Dlbclark75https://www.blogger.com/profile/06976461452839934801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-47895637716816056462014-09-19T18:38:04.191-07:002014-09-19T18:38:04.191-07:00Loved, loved, loved that ending!Loved, loved, loved that ending!lbclark75https://www.blogger.com/profile/06976461452839934801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-79278358402887993432014-09-19T18:35:34.645-07:002014-09-19T18:35:34.645-07:00Very powerful stuff. Makes my heart ache.Very powerful stuff. Makes my heart ache.lbclark75https://www.blogger.com/profile/06976461452839934801noreply@blogger.com