tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post7295211351395162693..comments2024-03-24T11:17:10.498-07:00Comments on Unemployed Imagination.: 2 Minutes. Go!JD Maderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comBlogger120125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-12270032320757654722016-11-06T13:14:09.657-08:002016-11-06T13:14:09.657-08:00Thank you so. It is part of something bigger. :DThank you so. It is part of something bigger. :DLaurie Borishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08361627047571650547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-59546909474549499142016-11-05T15:25:40.705-07:002016-11-05T15:25:40.705-07:00Thanks all!Thanks all!Teresa Kennedy Village Green Presshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03588835504403590614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-66118881678027832722016-11-05T15:10:43.726-07:002016-11-05T15:10:43.726-07:00Ha, waxing poetic indeed! :)Ha, waxing poetic indeed! :)David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-8965031422457559772016-11-05T15:09:05.361-07:002016-11-05T15:09:05.361-07:00Whoa, a tale of a life told this succinctly is som...Whoa, a tale of a life told this succinctly is some impressive writing.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-87823969449444038332016-11-05T15:07:26.288-07:002016-11-05T15:07:26.288-07:00Hey write more gothic, brother. Love it.Hey write more gothic, brother. Love it.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-35713138444422144272016-11-05T15:05:19.983-07:002016-11-05T15:05:19.983-07:00Yeah. Agree with the others.Yeah. Agree with the others.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-18267115289293105622016-11-05T15:03:49.941-07:002016-11-05T15:03:49.941-07:00I'm dittoing the ditto. Wow, this is powerful....I'm dittoing the ditto. Wow, this is powerful. Again, understatement. Works a treat.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-30725895239486150912016-11-05T15:01:19.324-07:002016-11-05T15:01:19.324-07:00I was enjoying the slice of life, then that paragr...I was enjoying the slice of life, then that paragraph beginning "Once outside..." brought me up short in a good way and gave what might have been mostly comic a new gravitas. I'm probably not explaining that very well. But in other words, I love this.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-70283992315305454112016-11-05T14:55:28.901-07:002016-11-05T14:55:28.901-07:00Thank you, David! Thank you, David! lbclark75https://www.blogger.com/profile/06976461452839934801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-10866540500985400832016-11-05T14:55:07.636-07:002016-11-05T14:55:07.636-07:00This puts me in mind of an AM Homes story that fea...This puts me in mind of an AM Homes story that features Barbies and is also quietly unsettling.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-14404901252063404452016-11-05T14:52:40.415-07:002016-11-05T14:52:40.415-07:00Manages the deft trick of staying light (yet subst...Manages the deft trick of staying light (yet substantial) with the heaviest of topics. Good stuff.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-63414653611413810412016-11-05T14:49:06.561-07:002016-11-05T14:49:06.561-07:00Ha ha, sorry to be the ditto guy here, but what th...Ha ha, sorry to be the ditto guy here, but what they all said. :)David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-15465963864708662452016-11-05T14:48:16.075-07:002016-11-05T14:48:16.075-07:00Subverting the cliché of "windows to the soul...Subverting the cliché of "windows to the soul" by extending the metaphor is brilliant here! Boarded up, lost the lease. And the interplay between windows and mirrors. Truly well played.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-15905252592700733522016-11-05T14:43:17.965-07:002016-11-05T14:43:17.965-07:00Pure storytelling chops and full immersion. I was ...Pure storytelling chops and full immersion. I was right there, from the get-go.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-6754584676259386422016-11-05T14:39:28.796-07:002016-11-05T14:39:28.796-07:00Well, I came back to this week's 2minutes to r...Well, I came back to this week's 2minutes to read all the stories, so these last comments on mine are an unexpected bonus! Thank you, my friends. :)David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-58933130833805849692016-11-05T14:37:03.603-07:002016-11-05T14:37:03.603-07:00Yeah, the understatement gives it its power. And a...Yeah, the understatement gives it its power. And after praising your opening sentence in your last piece, I have to say how much I am in awe of your final sentence here. (Yes, I'm a sentence junkie.)David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-75544334902809373062016-11-05T14:33:53.437-07:002016-11-05T14:33:53.437-07:00Ah, that final sentence! Echoing Dan, this is good...Ah, that final sentence! Echoing Dan, this is good dark. David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-84544892539462204202016-11-05T14:31:19.156-07:002016-11-05T14:31:19.156-07:00Everyone else already said it. I'd only add ho...Everyone else already said it. I'd only add how I enjoy your mastery of hooking the reader in the opening sentence.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-49673003667206629282016-11-05T14:28:44.666-07:002016-11-05T14:28:44.666-07:00Like Maggie says, melancholy indeed. Like Maggie says, melancholy indeed. David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-69906819125519959352016-11-05T14:27:23.843-07:002016-11-05T14:27:23.843-07:00Ha ha, Mr. Wocky jabbed! This is surreal, hallucin...Ha ha, Mr. Wocky jabbed! This is surreal, hallucinatory, and wonderful.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-41684599439782781122016-11-05T14:24:15.649-07:002016-11-05T14:24:15.649-07:00Ha, I love it. Here's hoping the orange one wa...Ha, I love it. Here's hoping the orange one wakes up in a lake of fire on Wednesday. ;)David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-90493801516850195262016-11-05T14:21:48.789-07:002016-11-05T14:21:48.789-07:00Red and gold fire! The fall version of Red and Bla...Red and gold fire! The fall version of Red and Black! Glad you're back.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-41192849679779342232016-11-05T13:33:37.382-07:002016-11-05T13:33:37.382-07:00Thank you all. Something new for me that I hope to...Thank you all. Something new for me that I hope to work into a full novel soonish. :)lbclark75https://www.blogger.com/profile/06976461452839934801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-14717840618415129522016-11-05T13:22:49.884-07:002016-11-05T13:22:49.884-07:00Heartrending and true. You do that so well. Heartrending and true. You do that so well. lbclark75https://www.blogger.com/profile/06976461452839934801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-77620749180859869772016-11-05T13:20:40.329-07:002016-11-05T13:20:40.329-07:00I hate to be a dittohead, but yeah, what they said...I hate to be a dittohead, but yeah, what they said. Love how this is complete in itself but could also be a part of something much larger.lbclark75https://www.blogger.com/profile/06976461452839934801noreply@blogger.com