tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post5048003545016655584..comments2024-03-29T07:15:56.908-07:00Comments on Unemployed Imagination.: 2 Minutes. Go!JD Maderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comBlogger163125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-4255529288070337352016-03-07T22:19:53.027-08:002016-03-07T22:19:53.027-08:00Wow. This one was a sock in the gut. Thank god f...Wow. This one was a sock in the gut. Thank god for the calvary, but damn if the calvary isn't late sometimes. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003192406233185389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-59381210931115650762016-03-07T22:19:38.664-08:002016-03-07T22:19:38.664-08:00*I*IAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003192406233185389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-78218559091956423492016-03-07T22:16:56.767-08:002016-03-07T22:16:56.767-08:00*I*IAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003192406233185389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-78422918037579167252016-03-07T22:15:30.677-08:002016-03-07T22:15:30.677-08:00Wow. This one was a sock in the gut. Thank god f...Wow. This one was a sock in the gut. Thank god for the calvary, but damn if the calvary isn't late sometimes. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003192406233185389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-55889117088747376062016-03-07T22:13:04.282-08:002016-03-07T22:13:04.282-08:00Mister Mader's right! That first line! You h...Mister Mader's right! That first line! You had me at "...a thousand ways to die." :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003192406233185389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-34728472445311552612016-03-07T22:10:31.690-08:002016-03-07T22:10:31.690-08:00Wow Danimal that was really well told! Awesome!Wow Danimal that was really well told! Awesome!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003192406233185389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-14171838062179516532016-03-07T22:06:10.035-08:002016-03-07T22:06:10.035-08:00I cry "Too short!" I mean understand th...I cry "Too short!" I mean understand the whole "Always leave 'em wanting more" but I think this is taking it a bit far Mister Leland! Lol! I loved it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003192406233185389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-80410501930999657512016-03-07T22:03:27.026-08:002016-03-07T22:03:27.026-08:00So many real things and textures in this! Wow! I...So many real things and textures in this! Wow! I want more!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003192406233185389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-77328915166199221022016-03-07T22:02:32.477-08:002016-03-07T22:02:32.477-08:00I'm late to the show, but both of these pieces...I'm late to the show, but both of these pieces are awesome! <br />I really liked this: "She sits in a web of her own broken promises, trying to fit pieces - jagged edge to jagged edge." Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003192406233185389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-53752181867685000392015-03-02T12:18:04.765-08:002015-03-02T12:18:04.765-08:00Sorry for the deletion. I decided to enter the pie...Sorry for the deletion. I decided to enter the piece in a contest and it can't be published anywhere, even on a blog. Maggie Rascalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03833651616288299290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-37310581700919389352015-02-28T18:36:12.857-08:002015-02-28T18:36:12.857-08:00YOU ALLLLL are brilliant!YOU ALLLLL are brilliant!juderosahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03787365645466855609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-11822253058728242592015-02-28T18:05:51.138-08:002015-02-28T18:05:51.138-08:00You put into words what my heart was feeling!You put into words what my heart was feeling!juderosahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03787365645466855609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-57851198658262944002015-02-28T08:55:04.558-08:002015-02-28T08:55:04.558-08:00Thank you kindly, brother. :)Thank you kindly, brother. :)JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-25846356888863116722015-02-27T19:25:17.242-08:002015-02-27T19:25:17.242-08:00Some day, I want to hear the story behind those so...Some day, I want to hear the story behind those songs... I listened to "And then he kissed me today" and was amazed... but that's true of everything of yours that I've listened to, so far... Leland Dirkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00813252580295128296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-79992370972409321972015-02-27T18:52:08.758-08:002015-02-27T18:52:08.758-08:00"Oh, I'm not actually a human, sir."..."Oh, I'm not actually a human, sir."<br /><br />"... I beg your pardon?"<br /><br />"I am a robot designed to simulate a human, an android, or rather, gynoid. Custom-built, based on a Model GT-5000 reinforced titanium chassis. Here, stick your finger in my mouth, I don't mind."<br /><br />The shapely young woman opened her mouth and stuck out her tongue, as if so a doctor might inspect her tonsils. Cautiously, the man stuck his right index finger into her mouth, almost to the second knuckle. Her mouth felt soft and warm like a real woman's, but much drier. She gently sucked for maybe a second or two, before pushing his finger out.<br /><br />She smacked her lips and said, "You had samosas and chutney for lunch. The fabric from which the pockets of your pants are made are 20% polyester. You have about 59 cents in change on you," she smirked, "and you didn't wash your hands after you last urinated."<br /><br />The man gaped, amazed, as the gynoid added, "I have chemical analysis sensors in my oral cavity. I can also shrug off most small-arms fire, and," she giggled, "If you get me real drunk, I can balance a car on my nose."Danimalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15226216295217819865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-10944715358175970562015-02-27T18:02:14.447-08:002015-02-27T18:02:14.447-08:00You share my fondness for Spanish vulgarities, eh?...You share my fondness for Spanish vulgarities, eh? I hope to later find an opportunity to use the sentence, "yo pago tu abuelita chupar mi pito, porque ella no tiene los dientes."Danimalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15226216295217819865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-25963896439728963622015-02-27T16:18:32.147-08:002015-02-27T16:18:32.147-08:00Reckon so. I've written a LOT of lyrics. Somew...Reckon so. I've written a LOT of lyrics. Somewhere, Pat must have a closet stuffed with old wrinkled papers. ;)JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-58674795588155359402015-02-27T16:17:18.382-08:002015-02-27T16:17:18.382-08:00Thank you! Thank you! Leland Dirkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00813252580295128296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-71826680287550834832015-02-27T15:54:15.072-08:002015-02-27T15:54:15.072-08:00Another beautiful piece of writing.Another beautiful piece of writing.JC Danielehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00721559702587189584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-14329994565873056132015-02-27T15:52:22.222-08:002015-02-27T15:52:22.222-08:00Whoa. *bows down at your feet*Whoa. *bows down at your feet*JC Danielehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00721559702587189584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-90701373893572480072015-02-27T15:44:04.072-08:002015-02-27T15:44:04.072-08:00all you gotta do is LISTEN and DO AS YOU'RE TO...all you gotta do is LISTEN and DO AS YOU'RE TOLD... Yeah, no. And you make the point brilliantly.Leland Dirkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00813252580295128296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-43978285088312008102015-02-27T15:43:07.138-08:002015-02-27T15:43:07.138-08:00This is effing brilliant! Brava!This is effing brilliant! Brava!JC Danielehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00721559702587189584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-72183146903215621822015-02-27T15:35:37.000-08:002015-02-27T15:35:37.000-08:00And everybody else, too!And everybody else, too!Teresa Kennedy Village Green Presshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03588835504403590614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-33014443764983505792015-02-27T15:32:45.304-08:002015-02-27T15:32:45.304-08:00And thank YOU Leland!And thank YOU Leland!Teresa Kennedy Village Green Presshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03588835504403590614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-25499616916793260012015-02-27T15:28:10.158-08:002015-02-27T15:28:10.158-08:00Oh wow. Was not expecting the ending. Beautifully ...Oh wow. Was not expecting the ending. Beautifully illustrates the relationship between a cat and her person. <3lbclark75https://www.blogger.com/profile/06976461452839934801noreply@blogger.com