tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post3045868251465737371..comments2024-03-24T11:17:10.498-07:00Comments on Unemployed Imagination.: 2 Minutes. GO!JD Maderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comBlogger148125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-15693922600156380732015-03-07T10:44:52.514-08:002015-03-07T10:44:52.514-08:00Thank you... Thank you... Leland Dirkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00813252580295128296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-68018032251648512762015-03-07T10:39:12.942-08:002015-03-07T10:39:12.942-08:00What David and JD said. :)What David and JD said. :)lbclark75https://www.blogger.com/profile/06976461452839934801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-27929492294280169522015-03-07T10:31:19.009-08:002015-03-07T10:31:19.009-08:00For real! It's much appreciated. :)For real! It's much appreciated. :)JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-1629567405161498462015-03-07T10:30:58.756-08:002015-03-07T10:30:58.756-08:00I like the tone of your pieces so much. There is a...I like the tone of your pieces so much. There is an urgency to the nonchalance. If that makes sense. Very confident writing. And I always like a Phoenix. JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-24611326231004341922015-03-07T10:29:01.355-08:002015-03-07T10:29:01.355-08:00Yeah, this is real, real good. Controlled, but pow...Yeah, this is real, real good. Controlled, but powerful. So much beauty and sadness in this prose. And for some reason, this line in particular made my heart flip a little: "Carrie didn’t flinch as much anymore, either." <br /><br />Excellent piece.JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-2934442408111597112015-03-07T10:26:22.967-08:002015-03-07T10:26:22.967-08:00I agree with Antrobus. And thanks for taking us ba...I agree with Antrobus. And thanks for taking us back to the bar/hunt. I've missed it. :)JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-64370066378976856592015-03-07T10:24:58.622-08:002015-03-07T10:24:58.622-08:00Yeah, I like this one a lot. Having been gentrifie...Yeah, I like this one a lot. Having been gentrified out of the mission myself, you handled that apathy/anger really well. This piece is tight as shit. And I love that they bounce. Makes the whole thing.JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-73497417485539517052015-03-07T10:19:59.758-08:002015-03-07T10:19:59.758-08:00Thanks, G. :)Thanks, G. :)JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-68267463985837372892015-03-07T09:36:07.696-08:002015-03-07T09:36:07.696-08:00:):)David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-57505820938544133022015-03-07T09:34:19.880-08:002015-03-07T09:34:19.880-08:00Ha, you're at the next level, I think. And I b...Ha, you're <i>at</i> the next level, I think. And I bet there's another one after that. David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-24752673440313035132015-03-07T06:34:36.087-08:002015-03-07T06:34:36.087-08:00Laughter and rage are good partners... and if you&...Laughter and rage are good partners... and if you're going to hell, I know you'll be in good company... Leland Dirkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00813252580295128296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-47711103055877699332015-03-07T06:29:04.803-08:002015-03-07T06:29:04.803-08:00Thank you both!Thank you both!Leland Dirkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00813252580295128296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-80951342255420282442015-03-07T06:28:12.600-08:002015-03-07T06:28:12.600-08:00You're kind to say so! Thank you!You're kind to say so! Thank you!Leland Dirkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00813252580295128296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-70383002320054301912015-03-07T06:27:09.361-08:002015-03-07T06:27:09.361-08:00Words count. Words matter. Thank you.Words count. Words matter. Thank you.Leland Dirkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00813252580295128296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-20841462378758152182015-03-07T06:26:22.077-08:002015-03-07T06:26:22.077-08:00Thank you, sirThank you, sirLeland Dirkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00813252580295128296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-16738241300871138802015-03-07T06:24:48.803-08:002015-03-07T06:24:48.803-08:00Thank YOU for reading what we write!Thank YOU for reading what we write!Leland Dirkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00813252580295128296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-64529923376500999962015-03-06T21:00:50.480-08:002015-03-06T21:00:50.480-08:00Laura, I'm happy you felt that, as that paragr...Laura, I'm happy you felt that, as that paragraph in particular was heartfelt enough to give me some real life feelz.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-80238020462449147742015-03-06T20:55:18.372-08:002015-03-06T20:55:18.372-08:00Yeah, that circularity is so true. But phases migh...Yeah, that circularity is so true. But phases might capture it even better.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-42657126267694767552015-03-06T20:53:35.139-08:002015-03-06T20:53:35.139-08:00Yeah, I saw it through a PTSD lens too. Which felt...Yeah, I saw it through a PTSD lens too. Which felt real and authentic (and I normally hate that word).David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-11991735765025718322015-03-06T20:51:21.054-08:002015-03-06T20:51:21.054-08:00All your stories feel like pieces of a bigger puzz...All your stories feel like pieces of a bigger puzzle that's playing out in the background.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-84611621031934166132015-03-06T20:49:53.850-08:002015-03-06T20:49:53.850-08:00Same as usual. Part of a world in the making, in t...Same as usual. Part of a world in the making, in the telling.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-55981431013037159132015-03-06T20:48:23.554-08:002015-03-06T20:48:23.554-08:00I'm headed for the next level. ;)I'm headed for the next level. ;)JD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-85256957271913327992015-03-06T20:46:10.665-08:002015-03-06T20:46:10.665-08:00Thanks bruddahThanks bruddahJD Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058074115809620653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-37823174642052589982015-03-06T20:44:15.810-08:002015-03-06T20:44:15.810-08:00Yes, this is great.Yes, this is great.David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1128469884487763839.post-40025183554220222002015-03-06T20:40:31.554-08:002015-03-06T20:40:31.554-08:00Preach on, brother. ;)Preach on, brother. ;)David Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486219404600185419noreply@blogger.com